Back in March I read a really insightful book, The Plot Thickens by Noah Lukeman. Unfortunately after finishing and doing all the plot strengthening and character building exercises, I decided I wanted to make some changes to Dragonsown. 4 months and 4500 more words later, the overhaul has finally been finished. Some of the changes I worked on were implementing the "Show, Don't Tell" concept- placing more emphasis on the reader coming to their own conclusions of how the chara